Post Info TOPIC: How Wrong
edbucks Approved Member Posts: 40Date: Jun 28, 2009
How Wrong
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HOW WRONG I've been counting all the cards Don't know how many in the deck Should I ring you, should I ring you Or would you wring my neck? So many things surround you Which are crutches, which are dross? And if I replaced them Would you ever feel the loss? I tried to be your friend I couldn't play that strategy You think no-one loves you How wrong can you be? I can't see you where you work I imagine you asleep It's almost like I watch you Breathing soft and dreaming deep I tried to be your friend But it wasn't fooling me You think no-one loves you How wrong can you be? I shouldn't follow you around Like some great and secret show Tell me you love me, black eyes Or tell me it's time to go I tried to be your friend But everyone could see You think no-one loves you How wrong can you be?
harryw Approved Member Posts: 248Date: Jun 28, 2009
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Hello Ed, welcome here on v-band! These are very powerful lyrics
Your felicitous manner of describing a certain situation is very impressive!
Best wishes Harry
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LurchyMusic Approved Member Posts: 891Date: Jun 28, 2009
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I agree....
These are great...
Luke - how do you feel about using any of this stuff for any new collabs...
What do you think...?
Just asking
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edbucks Approved Member Posts: 40Date: Jun 28, 2009
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Thanks Harry, thanks Lurchy.
I have some bits and pieces of music too, but I haven't matched them to lyrics... yet.
Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Aug 9, 2009
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Hello Ed,
Great lyrics you posted.
I try to compose some music on this one.
Everybody please feel free to collaborate I will post the separates asap.
I'am not much of a singer so please, please, will someone do the leadvocals!!!
Hank
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panzerfaustnl Approved Member Posts: 1112Date: Aug 9, 2009
Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Aug 10, 2009
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Hoi Marco,
I have no idea, but surely not as me.
Grinchy had a awesome vocal on 'Short Punksong - Parasites'.
Something like that would be very cool.
Greetz,
Henk
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gtrman4040 Moderator Posts: 2930Date: Aug 11, 2009
Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Aug 11, 2009
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Thanks guy's,
Here are the separate tracks to collaborate.
Chords are:
A. C. A. C. D.
Chorus:
B. G. D. A. Am. Em. Bsus4. B.
BPM 120 4/4
Hank
HW Drums.mp3 (3.18 MB)
HW Harmonic Moog.mp3 (3.36 MB)
HW Jazzbass.mp3 (4.47 MB)
HW Rickenbacker.mp3 (3.73 MB)
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Aug 12, 2009
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Hey Fellas,
I'd be honored to give vocals a whirl on this song. I'll try and do something in the next few days. Cool music, great lyrics. We'll make it happen.
-Ginchy
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Aug 12, 2009
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Thanks for the kind words guy's,
Here is the mix without vocals and a missing Hammond track.
Have fun with it.
Thanks,
Hank
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Aug 17, 2009
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Ok folks,
Here is what i worked on this afternoon. The way i recorded this, it sounds like there's room for another verse. The music didn't match the lyrics precisely, so I thought perhaps we could incorporate a solo before the final chorus. Or, maybe someone would like to write another verse.
This isn't my best performance ever. I could probably coarsed to do a little better, or maybe even add harmony if anyone is interested, otherwise I think it's decent enough.
I submitted vocal tracks that are pretty unprocessed as far as compression (I compressed them pretty heavily on my mix), so that whomever is interested can have more control. If you want wavs with or without FX, let me know.
My quick and dirty mix -
HowWrong(GinchyMix8-16-09).mp3 (2.28 MB)
Chorus double vox -
ChorusDoubleGinchy-HowWrong(8-16-09).mp3 (3.51 MB)
Harmony vox -
HarmonyGinchyVox-HowWrong(8-16-09).mp3 (3.51 MB)
Main Vox -
MainGinchyVox-HowWrong(8-16-09).mp3 (3.51 MB)
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crazyALEX Administrator Posts: 1713Date: Aug 17, 2009
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edbucks Approved Member Posts: 40Date: Aug 17, 2009
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Wow guys... you've transformed my grumpy ramblings into upbeat pop! Nice work.
Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Aug 17, 2009
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Ky,
Wow, this is realy, very, very cool!!!
Thanks a lot and let's do some more!
Yes, I left some space for a solo, I'am working on that.
Please can you post the vocal wave's for me so I can finish the song.
Thanks,
Henk
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Aug 17, 2009
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i'll get 'em up this evening.
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Aug 18, 2009
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Here you go, vocals in wav form. Yes, we should absolutely do more.
HowWrong-Vox-8-17-09.wav (38.65 MB)
HowWrong-Bvox-817-09.wav (38.65 MB)
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Aug 18, 2009
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Hello Ky, Thanks for helping this old rocker. Hope to get some time in the upcoming weekend to finish this song. Like your familysite's on Flickr and YouTube, nice! Greetz, Henkhttp://www.youtube.com/philhelmon
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Bigblockbuick Deleted Posts: 29Date: Sep 7, 2009
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Hi to all, My name is Bas van Erkel and i live in the Netherlands I am a newby on the the block but i know Henk for a couple of years. Very nice tune...and words i try to put some leadguitar between the vocal parts. I hope you enjoy it...... For me its was fun and it taste like more.How Wrong.mp3 (3.51 MB)
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gtrman4040 Moderator Posts: 2930Date: Sep 7, 2009
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Hi Bas...welcome to v-band
Yeah, this sounds cool...I like it. That guitar comes up huge! It simply adds another dimension, and now that you've done that...it feels odd when its not doing that...lol
Just kidding about that...it sounds good man, all of it. I stronger mix particular in the vocal and synth (that rhythm thing) areas. Like what? lol... I would lower the synth 6db and raise the vocals 6 to 8 db. Just a guess though. Good job on this guys.
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Sep 8, 2009
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Hi Bas, Welcome to V-Band. As soon as I get home I will listen to it. Thanks. Greetz, Henk
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panzerfaustnl Approved Member Posts: 1112Date: Sep 8, 2009
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gtrman4040 wrote: Hi Bas...welcome to v-band Yeah, this sounds cool...I like it. That guitar comes up huge! It simply adds another dimension, and now that you've done that...it feels odd when its not doing that...lol Just kidding about that...it sounds good man, all of it. I stronger mix particular in the vocal and synth (that rhythm thing) areas. Like what? lol... I would lower the synth 6db and raise the vocals 6 to 8 db. Just a guess though. Good job on this guys.
I think that the rythm guitar can also go more into the background. I feel that it is to prominent now.
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Bigblockbuick Deleted Posts: 29Date: Sep 8, 2009
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Hi there, i remix the song,its hard cause of my crappy speakers! (gonna buy new ones this week)
Thx for the advice guys,hope you like it Greetz BasHow Wrong.mp3 (3.51 MB)
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Sep 8, 2009
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Hey Bas, Finally your on V-Band! Nice going, is that Rory screaming? Can you post the seperate lead as WAV-file, please? Still working on the end, but I'am sure this weekend I'll mix de final version in my studio. Have to make a new videoclip soon, this one from us in 1985 is way to long ago!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qv72C9alCuc&feature=channel_page Have a nice day, Henk
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Bigblockbuick Deleted Posts: 29Date: Sep 8, 2009
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Hi Henk, Not the Rory this time....but SG standard Bad axe!
I got the graveyard shift........
I upload the wav. tomorrow so you can finish it this weekend.
'85...... Time flies my friend
Bye Bas
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Bigblockbuick Deleted Posts: 29Date: Sep 9, 2009
Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Sep 10, 2009
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i really need to redo these vocals. i'll do it by the week's end.
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Sep 10, 2009
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and by the way, i really dig the new guitar part bigblockbuick!
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LurchyMusic Approved Member Posts: 891Date: Sep 10, 2009
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Holy Crap Ginchy can SING....!
Awesome job...!
Please, please, please grab those lyrics in limbo and put 'em to those songs in limbo...!
This is the missing link here....
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Sep 11, 2009
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Hey Folks,
So I redid the vocals, and I'm much happier with them now. I added some harmony. Here is a rough mix... the chorus vocals are a little overcooked and the mp3 sounds a lit sub-standard quality (my sample rate must be messed up...), but you'll get the idea.
I'll upload the wavs later this evening.
-ginchy
HOW-WRONG(ginchymix9-10-09).mp3 (2.63 MB)
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Sep 11, 2009
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Everything AND the kitchen sink! So, there are a lot of tracks. The mix I did omitted portions of certain harmonies... I just wanted to keep the track interesting by way of development... that is, as the song progresses, I added more harmony each time the chorus repeats.
However, I decided to upload the full versions of each harmony so that you'd have full control when you mix it this weekend. I also messed with the arrangement of the instruments just for fun. I think it's a great track! Personally, I'd like to hear a little more variation through-out instrumentally. I think more dynamic range would increase the listenability.
Here's my latest mix:
HowWrong(9-11-09).mp3 (6.72 MB)
And here are all the files in wav format:
CHORUS HARMONY 1:
CHORUS-HARMONY-VOX1(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
CHORUS HARMONY 1 Double:
CHORUS-HARMONY-VOX2(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
CHORUS HARMONY 2:
CHORUS-HARMONY-VOX3(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
CHORUS HARMONY 2 double:
CHORUS-HARMONY-VOX4(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
CHORUS MELODY:
CHORUS-MELODY-VOX1(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
CHORUS MELODY double:
CHORUS-MELODY-VOX2(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
VERSE HARMONY:
VERSE-HARMONY-VOX(9-11-09).wav (38.68 MB)
VERSE MELODY:
VERSE-VOX(9-11-09).wav (38.66 MB)
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Please let me know if you need anything else from me!
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Hard_Way Approved Member Posts: 1186Date: Sep 11, 2009
Bigblockbuick Deleted Posts: 29Date: Sep 11, 2009
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Great work on that vocals men! Its sounds awesome......that "bridge thing" with the vocals before the solo part. Fits like a glove..... I will put it on my I-pod and listening this weekend when i paint my walls! Greets Bas
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Sep 13, 2009
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OK guy's,
After two day's of mixing, cut and paste, I think it's ready.
Thank you all for collaborating it was great fun, up to the next.
I hope you like the song.
Greetz,
Henk
How Wrong Master.mp3 (3.61 MB)
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Alex this project is finished!
HOW WRONG
Lyrics by Ed Cooke
Leadguitar Bas van Erkel
Music and Vocals by Ky Fifer
Music and Instruments by Henk Ph.J. Bol
Thanks.
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gtrman4040 Moderator Posts: 2930Date: Sep 13, 2009
Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Sep 14, 2009
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wow! i really like what you did with the arrangement. sounds very clean and well produced too! it was a pleasure dudes.
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Bigblockbuick Deleted Posts: 29Date: Sep 14, 2009
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Hi there, Nice i like it Sounds great on my new KRK's Good job GURU ! Hear you soon on V-Band Bas
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crazyALEX Administrator Posts: 1713Date: Sep 14, 2009
harryw Approved Member Posts: 248Date: Sep 14, 2009
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Sep 15, 2009
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Hey you guy's, Thanks for all the flowers! Greetz, Henk
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Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Jan 31, 2010
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Ginchy Approved Member Posts: 81Date: Feb 1, 2010
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this turned out really great Henk! That cartoon effect is very fitting, and i really like the way you superimposed our images over one another. You managed to make a video where we just stand in front of our cameras playing very entertaining! It's pretty mind-blowing considering we haven't met in real life and many of us are in different countries!
I happen to have a copy of Henk's album (he posted a link above) and it's really quite good. I suggest everybody check it out.
so when's the next album going to be done Henk?
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FastStrings Approved Member Posts: 654Date: Feb 1, 2010
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Hey Henk My Friend oh wow this video is just awsome. I really like the cartoon special effects. They are just excellent. You worked very hard and it shows up cool in the video. You did a great job Henk. Thank you Henk and I appreciate it. your friend Jimmy
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SuckerDJ Account Locked Posts: 467Date: Feb 1, 2010
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Great job Henk, groundbreaking stuff having you all on one vid - well done, I enjoyed it. V-Band should look to this as the future I feel. More complexity can come with the ease of applications. Ginchy looks so Roger Waters 2010, lol - classic.
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crazyALEX Administrator Posts: 1713Date: Feb 1, 2010
Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Feb 1, 2010
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Hello friends here on V-Band, Thanks for all the flowers. Please rate it on YouTube and leave your comment! It will put v-band-de more on the www. map. So if I was a miljonaire, I would hire the Abbey Road studio to jam with you guy's for a whole week! I just keep on dreaming! Thank you all, Henkhttp://www.youtube.com/philhelmon -- Edited by Philhelmon on Monday 1st of February 2010 01:07:04 PM
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crazyALEX Administrator Posts: 1713Date: Feb 16, 2010
Philhelmon Approved Member Posts: 194Date: Feb 18, 2010
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Hi Alex,
Awesome, I appreciate it greatly.
Thanks!
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