Hey My Friends
Her is the second part of the song Jerry and I worked on together. This one is like the aftermath of what happend and there will also be a third part lol. Jerry you did really great on Dead mans Wish. I hear in this one a loud thunder storm with lighting. If any of you guys like to give it a try that be great. Thank you and I appreciate it.
your friend Jimmy

Dead Man Of The Living

The thunder is loud outside
She drags him out in the hall
His feet scraping against the floor
She leans against the closet door he is to big and its small
There is an ax in the garage it is raised over his head
It wasn't like this in the beginning
Dead man of the living

Chorus
It wasn't like this in the beginning
Dead man of the living
Dead man of the living

She is holding the hand that never touched her
The arm that never even held her
The leg that wouldn't walk with her
She sure wishes she is dreaming
Dead man of the living
Why couldn't he be more forgiving
Dead man of the living

Chorus
She is tired now and weak and bleeding
Dead man of the living
Dead man of the living

Now she is outside running all over the place
The rain has just drenched her face
She stumbles in the dark the thunder is loud
She buries them here and there
Somewhere deep in the ground
Dead man of the living
It wasn't like this in the beginning
Dead man of the living

Solo
She sure wishes she is dreaming
Dead man of the living
Dead man of the living
It wasn't like this in the beginning
Dead man of the living
The End

Cool stuff Jimmy

Hey Jerry
My Friend Oh thank you I am glad you like it. I can't wait to see when you try this one. I know the music and vocals will be really cool. Thank you Jerry and I appreciate it.
your friend Jimmy

-- Edited by FastStrings on Friday 27th of November 2009 09:04:06 AM

I tried something Jimmy...

If nothing else I think the chorus hook "dead man of the living..." is kind of cool. I did use all of the lyrics on this particular draft.

dead_man_of_the_living_rough_draft_jerry.mp3 (4.60 MB)

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Hey Jerry
My Friend wow you did really a great job on this I like it. If we have to we can always change some of the words and work on the lyrics. I know there is alot of them lol. If you like maybe you can add something to fit the title. But you did a great job. Thank you Jerry and I appreciate it.
your friend Jimmy 

Thanks Jimmy...yeah, probably a good idea to work on this story a little. It's kind of confusing as to who the killer is. With that said it doesn't bother me as I like confusion

Hey Jerry
My Friend lol I am like you I like some confusion lol. But yeah I will work on a different story line to fit the song. But you did great with the rough draft I like it. Thank you Jerry and I appreciate it.
your friend Jimmy

Here, another rough draft I just did on this song....a couple more ideas. I just installed some more drums (yes, still installing) and this was my live setup test.

dead_man_of_the_living_rough_draft2_jerry.mp3 (2.93 MB)

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Hey Jerry
My Friend wow I really like this especiallly the vocals and the music. The music is just about the same with Dead Man Wish. This one is turning out great to. Your doing a great job Jerry. Thank you and I appreciate it.
your friend Jimmy

-- Edited by FastStrings on Sunday 29th of November 2009 09:08:07 AM

Yes, right after that first chorus...I was thinking of bringing in my Jimi Hendrix guitar...lol

I'm going to try to tweak the lyrics a little bit here Jimmy...mostly just to try and get it to flow with my style. More on that later.

Hey Jerry
My Friend lol I thought I heard some Jimi Hendrix who I am a big fan of lol. It works great with the music and vocals. You did great Jerry. Thank you and I appreciate it.
your friend Jimmy